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2024年英语一 翻译

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题目要求

Read the following text carefully and then translate the underlined segments into Chinese. Write your answers on the ANSWER SHEET. ( 10 points)

英文原文与参考译文

"Elephants never forget"—or so they say—and that piece of folklore seems to have some foundation.

"大象永远不会忘记"——人们常这样说——而这一民间传说似乎有一定根据。

The African savanna elephant, also known as the African bush elephant, is distributed across 37 African countries. They move between a variety of habitats, including forests, grasslands, woodlands, wetlands and agricultural land. Using tracking devices, researchers have shown that they have "remarkable spatial acuity." When finding their way to waterholes, they headed off in exactly the right direction, on one occasion from a distance of roughly thirty miles. What is more, they almost always seem to choose the nearest waterhole.

非洲草原象,也被称为非洲丛林象,分布在37个非洲国家。它们在多种栖息地之间移动,包括森林、草原、林地、湿地和农业用地。它们有时会跋涉超过六十英里寻找食物或水源,并且非常善于判断其他大象的位置——即使它们不在视线范围内。研究人员利用追踪设备已经表明,它们具有"非凡的空间敏锐度"。在寻找水坑的途中,它们会朝着完全正确的方向出发,有一次是从大约三十英里远的距离。而且,它们几乎总是选择最近的水坑。研究人员确信,大象总是精确地知道自己相对于所需全部资源的位置,因此既能走捷径,也能沿着熟悉的路线前行。

Although the cues used by African elephants for long-distance navigation are not yet understood, smell may well play a part.

尽管非洲象用于长距离导航的线索尚不清楚,但嗅觉很可能发挥了作用。

(46)They sometimes travel more than sixty miles to find food or water, and are very good at working out where other elephants are—even when they are out of sight. (47)The researchers are convinced that the elephants always know precisely where they are in relation to all the resources they need, and can therefore take shortcuts, as well as following familiar routes. Elephants are very choosy eaters, but until recently little was known about how they selected their food.

大象对食物非常挑剔,但直到最近人们对它们如何选择食物知之甚少。一种可能性是它们仅仅使用眼睛并尝试发现的植物,但那很可能会导致大量时间和精力的浪费,尤其是因为它们的视力实际上并不很好。

What is more, they can be detected even when they are not actually visible. New research suggests that smell is a crucial factor in guiding elephants—and probably other herbivores—to the best food resources.

植物产生的挥发性化学物质可以传播很远,而且非常有特征:每种植物或树木都有自己特定的气味标识。而且,即使它们实际上并不可见,这些气味也能被探测到。新的研究表明,嗅觉是引导大象——可能还有其他食草动物——找到最佳食物资源的关键因素。

The researchers first established what kinds of plant the elephants preferred either to eat or avoid when foraging freely. They then set up a "food station" experiment, in which they gave the elephants a series of choices based only on smell. Free-ranging elephants presumably also use this information to locate their preferred food.

研究人员首先确定了大象在自由觅食时更喜欢食用或避开哪些种类的植物。然后他们设立了一个"食物站"实验,在实验中他们给大象提供一系列仅基于气味的选择。实验表明,大象很可能使用气味来识别适合食用的树木区域,其次评估每个区域内树木的质量。自由活动的大象大概也使用这些信息来定位它们偏好的食物。

Their well-developed hippocampal structures may enable elephants, like rats and people, to construct cognitive maps.

它们发育良好的海马体结构可能使大象像老鼠和人类一样,能够构建认知地图。

(48)One possibility was that they merely used their eyes and tried out the plants they found, but that would probably result in a lot of wasted time and energy, not least because their eyesight is actually not very good.

(49)The volatile chemicals produced by plants can be carried a long way, and they are very characteristic: Each plant or tree has its own particular odor signature.

(50)The experiment showed that elephants may well use smell to identify patches of trees that are good to eat, and secondly to assess the quality of the trees within each patch.

划线句与参考译文

(46) They sometimes travel more than sixty miles to find food or water, and are very good at working out where other elephants are—even when they are out of sight.

参考译文:大象有时会跋涉六十多英里去寻找食物或水,而且非常擅长弄清楚其他大象身处何方——即便看不见对方时也是如此。

采分点解析:【意群】They sometimes travel more than sixty miles(主干主谓 + 距离状语)★采分→它们有时会走超 过六十英里 难点:They 须回上文还原为「大象」 句首 They 是跨句指代,结合 The African savanna elephant, also known as the African bush elephant, is distributed across 37 African countries. 锁定指代「(非洲草原)大象」。 直接译「它们」也能得分,但为照顾中文「先名后代」的习惯,首次出现宜还原为「大象」。 to find food or water,(目的状语(不定式))→去寻找食物或水, and are very good at working out where other elephants are—even when they are out of sight. (并列谓语 + working out 后接 where 宾语从句 + 破折号让步状语)★采分→并且非常擅长弄清楚 其他大象在哪里——即便看不见对方时也是如此。 难点:work out 取「弄清楚」熟词僻义 + they 回指「其他大象」 本块两大盲区:1 work out 是熟词僻义「弄清楚 / 判断出」,不是「锻炼」;它后接 where other elephants are 这一宾语从句,整体译「弄清楚其他大象在哪里 / 所处的位置」。2 破折 号引出的让步从句 even when they are out of sight 里的 they 不再指主语「大象」整体,而 是承接最近的 other elephants,即「其他大象」;out of sight 是固定搭配「视线之外 / 看不 见」。整块语义是「即便看不到其他大象(它们)也能判断出对方所在」。 【调序】并列结构 + 破折号让步从句的汉化 本句两段并列谓语用「并且 / 而且」连接,符合汉语顺译;破折号引出的 even when they are out of sight 在中文里习惯前置或紧跟谓语,可译「即便看不见对方,也能…」并提前到「擅长弄 清楚」之前,使「擅长 + 即便…也能弄清楚」连得上;也可保留破折号后置成「——即使其他大象 在视野之外」。

(47) The researchers are convinced that the elephants always know precisely where they are in relation to all the resources they need, and can therefore take shortcuts, as well as following familiar routes.

参考译文:研究人员确信,大象总能精确知晓自己相对于所需的全部资源处于何方,因此既能沿着熟悉的路线行走,也能抄近道。

采分点解析:【意群】The researchers are convinced that(主干主谓 + that 宾语从句引导)★采分→研究人员确信 难点:be convinced that 译「确信 / 坚信」 be convinced that 是固定搭配,不要按「被说服」死译,应译为「确信、坚信、深信」,符合 学术语体;that 后整段都是宾语从句的内容。 the elephants always know precisely where they are in relation to all the resources they need, (宾语从句主干(含 where 从句 + in relation to 介词短语 + they need 定语从句))★采分→大象总 是精确地知道自己相对于所需的全部资源处在什么位置, 难点:in relation to 与 they need 的双重嵌套 in relation to 是固定搭配「相对于…、与…的相对位置」,不是「关系到」;resources they need 是省略 that 的定语从句,they 指大象、need 的宾语就是先行词 resources,整体译 「(它们)所需的资源」。where they are in relation to X 即「自己相对于 X 在哪里 / 自己与 X 的相对位置」。 and can therefore take shortcuts,(并列谓语(宾语从句内的第二个谓语))★采分→因此可以抄 近路, 难点:therefore 标示因果,take shortcuts 译「抄近道 / 走捷径」 therefore 把前一块的「精确知道位置」与本块的「能抄近路」连成因果链,译时要把「因此 / 所以」译出来;take shortcuts 是惯用搭配,「抄近道、走捷径」皆可。 as well as following familiar routes.(并列附加成分(as well as + 动名词))★采分→并且还能 沿着熟悉的路线行走。 难点:as well as 的重心在前,不是「和」简单并列 as well as 在汉译时要落实「除…之外还…」或「不仅…也…」的意味,重心仍在前一动作 take shortcuts;本处译「除了走熟路之外还能抄近路」或顺译「能抄近路,也能走熟路」皆可,但 要让两个动作都译到,否则丢一个采分点。 【调序】where 从句 + in relation to 短语的汉化倒装 英文 where they are in relation to all the resources they need 是「在哪里 + 相对于什么」的 两段式,汉语习惯把「相对于…」前置:译成「相对于它们所需的全部资源 + 自己(处)在什么位 置」更顺;后置定语 they need 提到先行词 resources 之前译「它们所需的(全部)资源」; therefore 与 as well as 按因果与并列关系顺译即可,不需大幅调序。

(48) One possibility was that they merely used their eyes and tried out the plants they found, but that would probably result in a lot of wasted time and energy, not least because their eyesight is actually not very good.

参考译文:一种可能是,大象仅凭眼睛去看,然后试吃它们发现的植物;但这样做很可能会白白耗费大量时间和精力,尤其是因为它们的视力其实并不算好。

采分点解析:【意群】One possibility was that they merely used their eyes and tried out the plants they found,(主干 + 表语从句(含两个并列动词与定语从句))★采分→一种可能是它们仅仅用眼睛去看,然后试吃 自己发现的植物, 难点:they 指「大象」、try out 译「试吃 / 试用」 they 跨句承接 Elephants are very choosy eaters,指「大象」;try out 是「试验、试吃、尝 试」,结合「植物」语境译「试吃 / 尝一尝」最贴;the plants they found 是省略 that 的定语 从句,译「它们发现的植物」。 but that would probably result in a lot of wasted time and energy,(but 引出的转折分句(that 回 指上句做法))★采分→但那样做很可能会浪费大量时间和精力, 难点:that 回指「上面那种做法」,result in 译「导致 / 造成」 that 不是泛指代词,而是回指上半句「靠眼睛看 + 试吃」这一整套做法,译时宜补出「这样做 / 那种做法」让指代落地;result in 是「导致、造成」的固定搭配,与 result from(源于)反 向,不要混。 not least because their eyesight is actually not very good.(原因状语从句(not least because 引 导))★采分→尤其是因为它们的视力其实并不好。 难点:not least because 是强调式短语,译「尤其是因为 / 特别是因为」 not least 字面是「不是最少」,惯用表达里译「尤其、特别」,强调本因素在诸多原因里最值 得一提;actually 取「其实、事实上」,对前文「靠眼睛看」形成隐含反讽。整块译「尤其是因 为它们的视力其实并不好」。 【调序】表语从句顺译 + 转折与原因按汉语习惯连接 本句主体结构是「假设 — 转折 — 原因」三段式,汉语恰好也走这个顺序,可整体顺译;表语从句 that 后不必倒装;原因从句保持后置,用「尤其是因为…」承接;the plants they found 这种短 定语从句按「…的…」前置到先行词前。

(49) The volatile chemicals produced by plants can be carried a long way, and they are very characteristic: Each plant or tree has its own particular odor signature.

参考译文:植物释放的挥发性化学物质可以传到很远的地方,而且它们极具辨识度:每一种植物或树木都拥有自己独特的气味标识。

采分点解析:【意群】The volatile chemicals produced by plants can be carried a long way,(主干主谓(被动语态)+ 过去分词作后置定语)★采分→植物产生的挥发性化学物质能够被传送到很远的地方, 难点:produced by plants 是后置定语,被动可转主动 volatile 在此取「易挥发的、挥发性的」化学语义,不是「动荡的」;produced by plants 是过 去分词作 chemicals 的后置定语,汉译时前置成「植物产生的 / 植物释放的」;can be carried 是被动语态,汉语可保留被动「被传送 / 被带到」,也可化主动为无主句「能传到很远」,更贴 汉语习惯。 and they are very characteristic:(并列分句 + 冒号引出解释)★采分→并且它们具有非常鲜明的 特征: 难点:they 回指「挥发性化学物质」,characteristic 是形容词 句中 they 必须回到本句前半还原为「(这些)挥发性化学物质」,否则后文「气味标识」接不 上。characteristic 这里是形容词「有特点的、独特的、可作辨识标志的」,不是名词「特 征」;译「极具辨识度 / 各有特色 / 各具特点」均可,必须把「独特、可辨识」的意思译出。 Each plant or tree has its own particular odor signature.(冒号后解释句(同位/补充说明))★采 分→每一种植物或树木都有自己独特的气味标识。 难点:odor signature 译「气味标识 / 气味印记 / 气味特征」 signature 在此不是「签名」字面义,而是熟词僻义「标志、独特印记」(类似 fingerprint 的 延伸用法);odor signature 整体译「气味标识 / 气味印记 / 独特气味」皆可,必须传达「像签 名一样独一无二」的核心义;each ... has its own particular 中的 own 与 particular 略有重 叠,汉语合并译「自己独特的 / 各自专属的」即可,不必两词都译。 【调序】过去分词后置定语前置 + 冒号解释句保留 produced by plants 这一后置定语前置成「植物(产生 / 释放)的」放到 chemicals 前;被动语 态 can be carried 可化主动「能传到很远」,符合汉语少用被动的习惯;冒号在汉语里保留即可, 承接前后的「概括—举例」关系。整句基本顺译,不大调。

(50) The experiment showed that elephants may well use smell to identify patches of trees that are good to eat, and secondly to assess the quality of the trees within each patch.

参考译文:该实验表明,大象很可能利用嗅觉来识别哪些树丛适合食用,其次还会评估每一片树丛中各棵树的品质。

采分点解析:【意群】The experiment showed that(主干主谓 + that 宾语从句引导)★采分→该实验表明 难点:show that 译「表明 / 显示 / 证明」 show that 在实验语境里译「表明 / 证明 / 显示」,比「展示」更地道;定冠词 The experiment 回指上文 They then set up a "food station" experiment, in which they gave the elephants a series of choices based only on smell.,可译「该实验 / 这项实验」。 elephants may well use smell to identify patches of trees that are good to eat,(宾语从句主干 (含 may well 情态 + 目的不定式 + 定语从句))★采分→大象很可能会利用嗅觉来识别出适合食 用的树丛, 难点:may well 译「很可能 / 完全可能」,patches of trees 译「成片的树 / 树丛」 may well 是「很可能、完全可能、大有理由」的固定情态搭配,比单独 may 语气更强,不要漏 译「很」;patches 不是「补丁」,结合上文 what kinds of plant the elephants preferred either to eat or avoid when foraging freely 觅食语境取「成片生长的一小片树 / 树丛 / 树 片」;that are good to eat 是定语从句修饰 patches of trees,按语义即「适合食用的那一片 片树」,译「适合食用 / 好吃 / 可食用 / 值得吃」均可。 and secondly to assess the quality of the trees within each patch.(并列目的不定式(与前面 to identify 并列,secondly 顺序词))★采分→其次(还会用嗅觉)评估每一片树丛内部各棵树的 品质。 难点:secondly 暗含 firstly 省略,承接前一目的 secondly 暗示前一目的 to identify 是「第一步」,本块是「第二步」,汉译宜补出「其次 / 第 二步」与「(同样用嗅觉)」让两段并列关系清楚;assess the quality 译「评估…的品质」; within each patch 是「在每一片树丛之内」,与前文 patches of trees 的「树丛」概念呼应, 前后术语一致。 【调序】短定语从句前置 + 并列目的状语顺译 that are good to eat 是短定语从句(4 词),按「…的…」前置到 patches of trees 之前,译 「适合食用的(成片)树丛」;两个目的不定式 to identify… 与 to assess… 用 and secondly 并 列,汉语按「首先…,其次…」或「…,其次(用嗅觉)…」顺译即可,不必倒装;within each patch 作地点状语就地译「在每一片树丛之内」。

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逐句解析 句前 (N) 即考卷划线句题号,与卷面下划线句一一对应——满分 10 分、每句约 2 分,阅卷把每句切成意群按采 分点给分(★ 为采分点意群)。 【来源】本文节选自David Barrie 的著作 Supernavigators: Exploring the Wonders of How Animals Find Their Way《超级导航家:探索动物不可思议的寻路本能》第25章The Human Navigational Brain(人类的导航大脑)。 【主旨】大象凭空间记忆与嗅觉精准觅食 全文围绕「大象记性好」展开科学解释:"Elephants never forget"—or so they say—and that piece of folklore seems to have some foundation. 提出主题,随后用非洲草原象的研究证明它 们具备 remarkable spatial acuity 与抄近路能力,再引出 smell is a crucial factor in guiding elephants,最终归因于 well-developed hippocampal structures。基调是科普性的、肯定语 气,因此涉及大象能力的词(precisely、crucial、remarkable)一律取褒义、肯定取向,不能译 成模棱两可。

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