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2014年英语一 翻译

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题目要求

Read the following text carefully and then translate the underlined segments into Chinese. Write your answers on the ANSWER SHEET. ( 10 points)

英文原文与参考译文

Music means different things to different people and sometimes even different things to the same person at different moments of his life. It might be poetic, philosophical, sensual, or mathematical, but in any case it must, in my view, have something to do with the soul of the human being. Hence it is metaphysical; but the means of expression is purely and exclusively physical: sound. I believe it is precisely this permanent coexistence of metaphysical message through physical means that is the strength of music.

音乐对不同的人意味着不同的东西,有时甚至对同一个人在其生命的不同时刻也意味着不同的东西。它可能是诗意的、哲学的、感性的或数学的,但无论如何,在我看来,它必须与人类的灵魂有某种联系。因此它是形而上的;但表达的手段却纯粹且完全是物理的:声音。我相信,正是这种通过物理手段传递形而上信息的永恒共存构成了音乐的力量。这也是为什么当我们试图用语言描述音乐时,我们所能做的只是表达我们对它的反应,而无法把握音乐本身。

Beethoven's importance in music has been principally defined by the revolutionary nature of his compositions. He freed music from hitherto prevailing conventions of harmony and structure. Sometimes I feel in his late works a will to break all signs of continuity. The music is abrupt and seemingly disconnected, as in the last piano sonata. In musical expression, he did not feel restrained by the weight of convention.

贝多芬在音乐中的重要性主要由其作品的革命性所界定。他使音乐从迄今为止盛行的和声与结构惯例中解放出来。有时我在他的晚期作品中感受到一种打破所有连续性迹象的意志。音乐是突兀的、看似不连贯的,

(46)It is also the reason why when we try to describe music with words, all we can do is articulate our reactions to it, and not grasp music itself. (47)By all accounts he was a freethinking person, and a courageous one, and I find courage an essential quality for the understanding, let alone the performance, of his works.

如同最后一首钢琴奏鸣曲。在音乐表达上,他不受传统惯例的束缚。据各方记载,他是一个思想自由的人,也是一个勇敢的人,而我认为勇气是理解他的作品的必备品质,更不用说演奏它们了。

This courageous attitude in fact becomes a requirement for the performers of Beethoven's music. His compositions demand the performer to show courage, for example in the use of dynamics.

这种勇敢的态度实际上成为贝多芬音乐演奏者的一项要求。他的作品要求演奏者展现勇气,例如在力度运用方面。贝多芬惯于以极强的力度增大音量,然后突然接以柔和的乐段,这在他之前的作曲家中很少使用。

Beethoven was a deeply political man in the broadest sense of the word. He was not interested in daily politics, but concerned with questions of moral behavior and the larger questions of right and wrong affecting the entire society.

贝多芬在最广泛意义上是一个深具政治意识的人。他对日常政治不感兴趣,但关心道德行为问题以及影响整个社会的更宏大的是非问题。尤其重要的是他对自由的看法,对他而言,自由与个人的权利和责任相关联:他倡导思想自由和个人表达自由。

Beethoven's music tends to move from chaos to order as if order were an imperative of human existence. For him, order does not result from forgetting or ignoring the disorders that plague our existence; order is a necessary development, an improvement that may lead to the Greek ideal of spiritual elevation. It is not by chance that the Funeral March is not the last movement of the Eroica Symphony, but the second, so that suffering does not have the last word.

贝多芬的音乐倾向于从混乱走向秩序,仿佛秩序是人类存在的当务之急。对他来说,秩序并非源于遗忘或忽视困扰我们存在的无序;秩序是一种必要的发展,一种可能通向希腊精神升华理想的改进。《葬礼进行曲》不是《英雄交响曲》的最后乐章而是第二乐章,这并非偶然,因此苦难并没有成为最后的话语。人们可以这样诠释贝多芬的许多作品:苦难不可避免,但与之抗争的勇气使生命值得活下去。

(48)Beethoven's habit of increasing the volume with an extreme intensity and then abruptly following it with a sudden soft passage was only rarely used by composers before him.

(49)Especially significant was his view of freedom, which, for him, was associated with the rights and responsibilities of the individual: he advocated freedom of thought and of personal expression.

(50)One could interpret much of the work of Beethoven by saying that suffering is inevitable, but the courage to fight it renders life worth living.

划线句与参考译文

(46) It is also the reason why when we try to describe music with words, all we can do is articulate our reactions to it, and not grasp music itself.

参考译文:这也正是为什么当我们试图用语言来描述音乐时,我们所能做的只是把自己对音乐的感受表达出来,而无法真正把握音乐本身。

采分点解析:【意群】It is also the reason why(主干+reason 的同位/定语从句引导)★采分→这也是……的原因 难点:It 回指还原+why 引出原因从句 It 不是"它",要还原成前句"形而上内涵与物质声音并存"这件事 this permanent coexistence of metaphysical message through physical means;why 在此引导一个长定语从句,修饰 reason,意为"……之所以如此的原因",后面整段都在说"什么的原因"。 when we try to describe music with words,(时间状语从句)★采分→当我们试图用语言描述音 乐时 难点:describe...with words="用言语描述" with words 是"用文字/语言"作方式状语,不要漏译;这是承接全文"音乐之内涵难以言传"的关 键,译"用语言/文字去描述音乐"。 all we can do is articulate our reactions to it,(主句(reason why 所修饰的内容))★采分→我们 能做的全部就是表达我们对它的反应 难点:all we can do is (to) do="所能做的不过是";articulate=清晰说出 all we can do is + 动词原形,是"我们所能做的不过是……"的固定结构,含"仅此而已"的限 定意味。articulate 在此非"灵活的",而是动词"清楚地表达、说出"(熟词僻义)。to it 的 it 指 music。 and not grasp music itself.(并列谓语(与 articulate 并列,受 all we can do is 统辖))★采分→而 无法把握音乐本身 难点:grasp="把握、领会"(非"抓住");and not 表转折性对照 grasp 此处取抽象义"领会、把握住",不译"抓住"。and not 与前面 articulate 形成对照:我 们"只能说出反应","却无法把握音乐本身",music itself 强调"音乐本身"。 【调序】why 长从句整体后置,按汉语"当……时,我们只能……"重排 英文是"It is the reason why [从句]",汉语不宜说"这是……为什么……的原因"。可把 reason why 处理成"这也正是……的原因",把 when 时间状语提到主句前,译成"当我们用语言描述音乐时,我 们所能做的只是……而非……",让时间状语、主句、转折顺次铺开。

(47) By all accounts he was a freethinking person, and a courageous one, and I find courage an essential quality for the understanding, let alone the performance, of his works.

参考译文:据大家所说,他是一个思想自由的人,也是一个勇敢的人;而我认为,勇气是理解他的作品所必不可少的一种品质,更不用说演奏他的作品了。

采分点解析:【意群】By all accounts he was a freethinking person, and a courageous one,(第一分句(含并列表 语))★采分→据各方所说,他是一个思想自由的人,也是一个勇敢的人 难点:By all accounts="据大家所说/普遍认为";one 替代 person By all accounts 是固定短语,意为"据各方/普遍说法",不是"按所有账户"。a courageous one 的 one 代替前面的 person,译"一个勇敢的人"即可,不必重复"人"也行。freethinking=思想 自由的。 and I find courage an essential quality(第二分句主干(find + 宾语 + 宾补))★采分→而我发现 勇气是一种必不可少的品质 难点:find sth + 名词="认为某物是……"(宾补结构) find courage an essential quality 是"find+宾语 courage+宾补 an essential quality",意 为"认为勇气是一种……的品质",不是"发现一种品质"。essential=必不可少的、至关重要的。 for the understanding, let alone the performance, of his works.(介词短语作定语+插入语 let alone)★采分→对于理解他的作品而言——更不用说演奏了 难点:let alone="更不用说"(含递进否定);the understanding...of his works 被插入语 隔断 the understanding ... of his works 本是一个整体"对他作品的理解",中间被 let alone the performance 这个插入语切开。let alone 意为"更别提、更不用说",表程度递进:理解尚且 需要勇气,演奏就更需要了。还原结构:courage 对"理解他的作品"是必需品质,"更不用说 演奏"。 【调序】插入语 let alone 归位、of his works 提前修饰 understanding 把被插入语隔断的 the understanding ... of his works 先拼回"对他作品的理解",再把 let alone the performance 译成"更不用说演奏"放在其后;英文后置的 of his works 在汉语里提到"理解"前 作"的"字定语。

(48) Beethoven's habit of increasing the volume with an extreme intensity and then abruptly following it with a sudden soft passage was only rarely used by composers before him.

参考译文:贝多芬习惯于以极强的力度增大音量,随即又突然转入一个骤然轻柔的乐段,这种手法在他之前的作曲家中极少被采用。

采分点解析:【意群】Beethoven's habit of increasing the volume with an extreme intensity(主语核心+of 后置定语 (动名词1))★采分→贝多芬以极强的力度增大音量的习惯 难点:habit of doing 整个是主语;volume=音量、intensity=(力度)强度 这一长串到 was 之前都是主语:核心词 habit,后面 of increasing... 是动名词作定语说明"什么 习惯"。volume 此处指"音量"(不是"体积/卷"),intensity 指演奏"力度的强度",都是音乐语 境取义。 and then abruptly following it with a sudden soft passage(of 后置定语的并列部分(动名词2)) ★采分→然后又突然接以一个骤然轻柔的乐段 难点:following it 的 it 指前面增大的音量/强音;passage=(乐曲的)乐段;soft=(声 音)轻柔 and then ... following 与前面 increasing 并列,同受 habit of 统辖,描述习惯的第二个动作。 it 回指前句"被增强的音量/强音"。passage 在音乐语境是"乐段、段落",不是"通道";soft 指声 音"柔和、轻",不是"软"。abruptly/sudden 都强调"突然"。 was only rarely used by composers before him.(谓语(被动语态)+时间/范围状语)★采分→在 他之前很少被作曲家使用 难点:被动 was used by="被……使用",宜转主动;before him=在他之前 was only rarely used by composers before him 是被动语态,汉语顺译"被……"略生硬,可转 主动"他之前的作曲家很少使用"。only rarely=极少、难得,before him=在贝多芬之前。 【调序】超长主语压缩前置、被动转主动 of increasing... and then following... 这一长串后置定语全部提到 habit 前,译成"贝多芬……的习 惯";谓语 was only rarely used by composers 把被动转成主动:"在他之前的作曲家极少使用 (这种手法)",避免"被……所使用"的翻译腔。

(49) Especially significant was his view of freedom, which, for him, was associated with the rights and responsibilities of the individual: he advocated freedom of thought and of personal expression.

参考译文:尤为重要的是他对自由的看法。对他而言,这种自由观与个人的权利和责任紧密相关:他主张思想自由和个人表达的自由。

采分点解析:【意群】Especially significant was his view of freedom,(主句(表语前置的倒装))★采分→尤为重要的 是他对自由的看法 难点:完全倒装:表语 Especially significant 提到句首,正常语序是 His view...was especially significant 本是 His view of freedom was especially significant,为强调把表语 Especially significant 提到了句首形成倒装。翻译时还原成正常语序:"他对自由的看法尤为重要/意义重大"。 significant=重要的、有意义的。 which, for him, was associated with the rights and responsibilities of the individual:(which 引 导的非限制性定语从句(含插入语 for him))★采分→对他而言,这种看法与个人的权利和责任 相关联 难点:which 指 his view of freedom;for him 是插入语;be associated with="与……相 关联" which 引导非限制性定语从句,先行词是 his view of freedom(他的自由观)。for him 被两 个逗号夹着,是插入语"对他来说",可单独提出。be associated with="与……相联系、相关 联"。the individual=个人、个体。 he advocated freedom of thought and of personal expression.(冒号后的解释说明(对上句的具体 化))★采分→他主张思想自由和个人表达的自由 难点:advocate=主张、提倡;freedom of thought and of personal expression=两种 自由并列 冒号在此引出对前文"自由观"的具体解释。advocate=公开主张、倡导。freedom of thought and of personal expression 是 freedom of A and (freedom) of B 的省略,即"思想自 由"与"个人表达的自由"两项并列。 【调序】倒装复位、which 从句独立成句、插入语提前 主句还原成"他对自由的看法尤为重要";which 较长,不前置硬塞,而是独立译成一个分句"(这种 看法)对他而言,与个人的权利和责任相关",重复"这种看法"承接先行词;for him 提到从句句首 译"对他而言";冒号保留,后接解释句。

(50) One could interpret much of the work of Beethoven by saying that suffering is inevitable, but the courage to fight it renders life worth living.

参考译文:人们可以这样解读贝多芬的大部分作品:苦难是不可避免的,但与苦难抗争的勇气却使生命变得值得度过。

采分点解析:【意群】One could interpret much of the work of Beethoven by saying that(主句(One 泛指主语)+ by doing 方式状语)★采分→人们可以这样解读贝多芬的大部分作品,即…… 难点:One=泛指"人们";by saying that="通过说……来(解读)"引出宾语从句 One 不是"一个人",而是泛指"人们/我们"。interpret=解读、诠释。by saying that... 是 方式状语"通过这样说……",that 引出后面两个并列分句的内容,译时可处理成"可以这样解 读……即……"。 suffering is inevitable,(saying 的宾语从句之一)★采分→苦难是不可避免的 难点:suffering=苦难、苦痛;inevitable=不可避免的 suffering 取名词"苦难、痛苦",呼应全文"贝多芬音乐从混乱走向秩序、苦难不是终曲"的语境 suffering does not have the last word。inevitable=必然的、不可避免的。 but the courage to fight it renders life worth living.(but 引导的并列转折分句(宾语从句之二)) ★采分→但与之抗争的勇气使生命值得一过 难点:it 指 suffering;render sth + 形容词="使某物变得……";worth living=值得活 to fight it 的 it 回指前句 suffering(苦难),即"与苦难抗争的勇气"。render 此处不是"给予/ 呈现",而是"使……变得"(render+宾语+形容词,熟词僻义)。renders life worth living ="使生活变得值得(去)过",worth+doing 表"值得做"。 【调序】by saying that 转成"即/也就是说"、render 译"使……变得" by saying that 不直译"通过说",而处理成"可以这样解读……即……"或"也就是说",让方式状语自 然衔接后面的内容。render life worth living 按使役结构译"使生命变得值得度过",worth living 作"值得活/值得度过"。

说明

逐句解析 句前 (N) 即考卷划线句题号,与卷面下划线句一一对应——满分 10 分、每句约 2 分,阅卷把每句切成意群按采 分点给分(★ 为采分点意群)。 【来源】The New York Review of Books(《纽约书评》)2013年4月4日一篇题为 Beethoven and the Quality of Courage(贝多芬与勇气)的文章。 【主旨】音乐的本质,及贝多芬其人其乐为何需要"勇气" 全文是一篇由演奏家口吻写的随笔:前半谈音乐"形而上的内涵借纯物质的声音表达"这一悖论 this permanent coexistence of metaphysical message through physical means that is the strength of music,后半以此为底座评价贝多芬——他革新音乐、思想自由、关心道德与自由, 其音乐"从混乱走向秩序"。作者态度是欣赏、推崇 Beethoven's importance in music has been principally defined by the revolutionary nature of his compositions。这个基调决定了划线句 里 courage、freedom、suffering 等词都取褒义、庄重义,不可译得轻飘。

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