2017年6月六级 第1套 写作

When young people stand at the crossroads between a vocational college and a university, my advice is clear: choose the university whenever it is within reach.

Admittedly, vocational colleges have real strengths. They train practical, job-ready skills and often lead to employment faster, which appeals to students eager to earn early. However, I still believe a university offers deeper and more lasting benefits. Firstly, a university builds a broad academic foundation and cultivates critical thinking, abilities that keep paying off as careers evolve. A friend of mine who studied engineering at university was later promoted to a management role precisely because he could analyse problems, not merely operate machines. Moreover, the wider network and long-term earning potential a degree brings usually outweigh the short-term gap in starting salaries.

In contrast, narrow technical training may limit future growth once industries change. Therefore, unless a student has a strong practical calling, I would firmly recommend the university path for its broader and more enduring rewards.

【第 1 段】 一句话完成表态 。首段用 crossroads between a vocational college and a university 点出选择维度，紧接 my advice is clear: choose the university 一句直接选边，落实了开门见山亮立场的功能。 【第 2 段】 让步转折加实例 。以 Admittedly 让步承认职校长处，再用 However, I still believe 转折立主张，Firstly/Moreover 串起两条理由，中间 A friend of mine who studied engineering 一句提供了具体例证，兑现了先让步再给理由配例。 【第 3 段】 反衬后重申 。用 In contrast 点出窄技能训练的局限，再以 Therefore, unless a student has a strong practical calling 有条件地重申建议大学，完成对比反衬并收束。

A N A L Y S I S · 审题与立意 这道题到底要写什么、立意是什么

动笔前先钉死本题的核心写作任务与读者语域

，再定中心立意与要展开的要点 —— 这些是本题特有的内容判断，不是通用套路。

核心任务 在职校与大学间选边表态 本题要写一篇议论文，就 give advice on whether to attend a vocational college or a university 给出建议，核心是 state your opinion——whether 是二选一信号，必须明确站到职业院校或大学的一边，不能两边都夸、不能只做优缺点对比。 读者 · 语域 面向阅卷人的正式议论 本题只要求 write an essay to state your opinion，没有具体收信人，因此是面向阅卷人的正式书面议论文。用正式语域、第一人称亮观点即可，不要写称呼、问候或署名——那是应用文格式，套到这里就跑格式。 中心立意 力荐大学，理据长远 本篇 state your opinion 的立场定为：只要条件允许，建议选择大学，因为它带来的学术根基、思维训练与长远回报比职业院校更持久。立场一句话钉死，全篇所有理由都为它服务。 要展开的要点 让步承认职校优势 先承认职业院校技能实用、就业更快，这是真实差异也是让步靶子——承认对方一点再转折，论证才显思辨而非武断。 大学夯实学术与思维 大学打下宽厚的学术基础、培养批判性思维，这类能力在职业变化时仍能持续增值，配一个由学历带来晋升的例子。 人脉与长远回报更高 学历带来的人际网络与长期薪资潜力，通常能抵消起薪上的短期差距，从而反衬窄口径技能训练的成长天花板。

S T R U C T U R E · 谋篇与逐段 怎么分段、每段写什么、能套哪些句架

按写作家族给出现成的段落框架（每段承担什么功能），并为每段配可直接套用的

功能句架 （留出填本题内容的空位）。段序与上方参考范文一一对应。

第 1 段 开门见山亮立场 点出职校与大学的抉择情境，一句话表明支持大学，回应 state your opinion。 第 2 段 让步加理由配例证 先让步承认职校优势，再转折给出大学在学术根基、人脉与长远回报上的理由，并插入一个具体例子。 第 3 段 对比反衬并重申 反衬窄技能训练的成长局限，重申建议选大学，简短收束。 第 1 段 点情境后直接选大学 描绘年轻人站在职校与大学的十字路口，随即明确建议：只要够得着，就选大学。这一句即是对 give advice on whether to attend a vocational college or a university 的正面回答。 点出选择维度 When young people stand at the crossroads between ___ and ___, ... 亮明立场 my advice is clear: choose ___ whenever ___. 第 2 段 承认职校快就业后论证大学更持久 先认职校技能实用、就业快；转折后给出大学夯实学术根基、培养批判性思维，并举一位大学工科毕业生因会分析问题而升任管理岗的例子，再补人脉与长远薪资潜力抵消起薪差距。 让步承认 Admittedly, ___ have real strengths. They ___. 转折立主张 However, I still believe ___ offers ___. 举例支撑 A friend of mine who ___ was later ___ precisely because ___. 第 3 段 点窄技能局限后重申选大学 指出行业变化时窄口径技能训练限制成长，随后重申：除非考生有强烈的实践志向，否则建议走大学之路，因其回报更宽广持久。 对比反衬 In contrast, ___ may ___ once ___. 重申收束 Therefore, unless ___, I would firmly recommend ___ for ___.

R E V I E W · 自检避坑 本题在四个评分维度怎样算达标、容易在哪丢分

按阅卷四维（内容切题 / 结构连贯 / 语言准确 /

字数格式）给出本题达标要点，并把最容易踩的低分写法摆出来 + 给改法 ——

这是写作版的「狠拆诱人错项」。

内容切题 立场必须唯一鲜明 核对是否真正 state your opinion——本篇从首段就锁定选大学，全篇不摇摆，才算切题；若写成两类教育优缺点对比即偏题。 结构连贯 三段各司其职 本篇立场段—论证段—重申段分工清晰，让步转折与举例过渡自然，读者能顺着衔接词看清推进。 语言准确 让步句式用准 本篇 While/However/precisely because 等结构须用准；举例句时态一致、搭配自然，才能在语言维拿分。 字数格式 卡死上下限不跑格式 本题明确要求 at least 150 words but no more than 200 words，既不能不足也不能超，且须是 essay 而非书信；超一点少一点都会失分。

P I T F A L L S · 典型低分写法

典型低分写法 · 反面示例与改法 两边都夸不选边 反面示例：Both vocational colleges and universities have their own advantages, so it really depends on the person. 这句只罗列优劣、拒绝选边，违背 state your opinion。应改成开门见山选边：My advice is clear: choose a university whenever it is within reach. 空喊大学好 反面示例：University is good and it is very important for students. 空泛无据。应补对比与例证：A university builds critical thinking, which helped my friend get promoted, while narrow skills alone rarely lead so far. 注水凑字超限 反面示例：University is very very important, and university is really really useful, because university helps a lot and helps very much. 同义重复注水，易撑破 at least 150 words but no more than 200 words 的上限。应改成一句有信息量的话：A university degree broadens both career options and long-term earning potential. 把议论文写成信 反面示例：Dear friend, I want to give you some advice... Yours, Li Ming. 本题要求 write an essay to state your opinion，加称呼和署名即跑格式。应删去书信框架，直接以观点句开篇。