The Tang Dynasty, which began in 618 and ended in 907, was the most splendid period in Chinese history. After nearly three centuries of development, Tang China became the most prosperous power in the world, and its capital Chang'an was the largest city in the world at that time. During this period, the economy was developed, commerce flourished, social order was stable, and even the borders were open to the outside world. With the growth of urbanization and wealth, art and literature flourished as well. Li Bai and Du Fu were poets known for the simplicity and naturalness of their works. Their poems touched the hearts of both scholars and ordinary people. Even today, many of their poems are still widely read and recited by both children and adults.
逐句译法
1. 唐朝始于618年,终于907年,是中国历史上最灿烂的时期。
参考译法:The Tang Dynasty, which began in 618 and ended in 907, was the most splendid period in Chinese history.
主干:主语唐朝+系动词+表语最灿烂时期(主语策略:原句主语)中文主语明确就是 唐朝。这句真正的主干是"唐朝是…最灿烂的时期",主谓宾(表语)为 The Tang Dynasty was the most splendid period;而 始于618年,终于907年 是对主语的补充说明,不进主干。
语法点:- 时态回指全篇基调用一般过去时:began / ended / was,因为讲的是这个已结束朝代当年的状况。 - 冠词the Tang Dynasty 专名带定冠词;the most splendid period 最高级前必须加 the。 - 最高级最灿烂 用形容词最高级 the most splendid / the most glorious;"中国历史上"作范围状语 in Chinese history,限定最高级的比较范围。
降级处理:始于终于降级为分词或定语从句始于618年,终于907年 是对主语的描述,不要和主干用 and 平铺成"The Tang Dynasty began in 618 and ended in 907 and was…"三个动词排队的流水句。可降级成定语从句 which began in 618 and ended in 907,或分词结构 lasting from 618 to 907,挂到主语后面,让"是最灿烂时期"这个判断当唯一主干谓语。
2. 经过近三百年的发展,唐代中国成为世界上最繁荣的强国,其首都长安是当时世界上最大的都市。
参考译法:After nearly three centuries of development, Tang China became the most prosperous power in the world, and its capital Chang'an was the largest city in the world at that time.
主干:两套主谓拆成两句或并列(主语策略:原句主语)这句中文其实含两个独立断言:唐代中国成为世界上最繁荣的强国(主语 Tang China,谓语 became,宾语 the most prosperous power)和 其首都长安是当时世界上最大的都市(主语 its capital Chang'an,系动词 was,表语 the largest city)。两套主谓各自成句,不能挤进一个主干。
语法点:- 时态回指基调用一般过去时:became / was,讲当年的状况。 - 最高级与冠词最繁荣的强国 → the most prosperous power;最大的都市 → the largest city,两处最高级都加 the。 - 单复数近三百年 → nearly three centuries,century 用复数;development 不可数不加 s。 - 指代其首都 的"其"指唐代中国,用物主代词 its capital,注意 its 不带撇号(its 不是 it's)。
降级处理:经过近三百年发展降级为状语经过近三百年的发展 不是主干,降级成介词短语状语 After nearly three centuries of development 放句首;当时 降级成时间状语 at that time / then 修饰长安那半句。主体是"成为强国"+"长安是最大都市"两套主谓用 and 并列。
3. 这一时期,经济发达、商业繁荣、社会秩序稳定,甚至边境也对外开放。
参考译法:During this period, the economy was developed, commerce flourished, social order was stable, and even the borders were open to the outside world.
主干:四个并列主谓陈述这一时期(主语策略:原句主语)这句是四个并列短断言:经济发达(the economy was developed)、商业繁荣(commerce flourished / was prosperous)、社会秩序稳定(social order was stable)、边境也对外开放(the borders were open)。每个都是"某方面+怎么样",各有主语,宜处理成并列分句。
语法点:- 时态回指基调用一般过去时:was developed / flourished / was stable / were open,讲当年这一时期的状况。 - 单复数与主谓一致边境 指国家四周的多条边境线,用复数 the borders were(系动词用 were);the economy / commerce / social order 为单数,配 was。每个谓语都要和自己的主语对上单复数。 - 用词对外开放 译 open to the outside world 或 open to foreign trade,open 在此作形容词表语;勿写成中式的 open outward。
降级处理:这一时期降为时间状语甚至作递进这一时期 降级成时间状语 During this period 置于句首统领全句。甚至边境也对外开放 的"甚至"是递进语气,用 even 引出,放在最后一个并列项前(and even the borders were open),体现"连边境都开放了"的层层加码。
4. 随着城市化和财富的增加,艺术和文学也繁荣起来。
参考译法:With the growth of urbanization and wealth, art and literature flourished as well.
主干:主语艺术和文学谓语繁荣起来(主语策略:原句主语)主干是 艺术和文学也繁荣起来:主语 art and literature,谓语 flourished / thrived。这是个简单的主谓句,主语明确,无需补主语或转被动。
语法点:- 时态回指基调用一般过去时:flourished;若用 As 从句,从句也用过去时 increased。 - 单复数与不可数城市化 urbanization、财富 wealth、art、literature 均为不可数名词,不加 s、一般不加冠词。 - 用词繁荣起来 用 flourished / thrived,比 became prosperous 更贴"蓬勃兴起"的动态;"也"用 also 或 too 呼应前文繁荣,可省。
降级处理:随着增加降为with或as状语随着城市化和财富的增加 是伴随背景,降级成状语:用介词 With urbanization and growing wealth,或用 As 引导的时间状语从句 As urbanization advanced and wealth increased。主干"艺术和文学繁荣"保持一个谓语 flourished。
5. 李白和杜甫是以作品简洁自然而著称的诗人。
参考译法:Li Bai and Du Fu were poets known for the simplicity and naturalness of their works.
主干:李杜是诗人主系表(主语策略:原句主语)主干是判断句 李白和杜甫是…诗人:主语 Li Bai and Du Fu,系动词 were,表语 poets。以作品简洁自然而著称 是对 poets 的修饰,不进主干。
语法点:- 时态回指基调用一般过去时:were / were known,讲这两位古人当年的身份与声誉。 - 单复数主语是两个人 Li Bai and Du Fu,表语 poets 用复数,系动词用 were;their works 用复数(作品不止一篇)。 - 介词搭配"以…著称"固定搭配 be known for(因…而出名),注意是 for 不是 as;be known as 意为"作为…而知名"含义不同。
降级处理:著称改定语从句修饰诗人以作品简洁自然而著称 降级成修饰 poets 的后置定语:用定语从句 who were known for the simplicity and naturalness of their works,或介词短语 known for…。"作品简洁自然"是"著称"的内容,用 for+名词短语承载。
6. 他们的诗歌打动了学者和普通人的心。
参考译法:Their poems touched the hearts of both scholars and ordinary people.
主干:主语他们的诗歌谓语打动宾语心(主语策略:原句主语)主干清晰:主语 他们的诗歌 their poems / poetry,谓语 打动了 touched / moved,宾语 学者和普通人的心 the hearts of scholars and ordinary people。是个标准主谓宾句,主语明确无需改造。
语法点:- 时态回指基调用一般过去时:touched / moved,呼应原文"打动了"的完成动作。 - 单复数他们的诗歌 指多首诗,用复数 their poems(或不可数 their poetry);学者和普通人 泛指各类人,用复数 scholars and ordinary people;hearts 多人之心用复数。 - 用词打动了…的心 用 touched / moved the hearts of…,touch one's heart 是"打动人心"的地道说法;勿用 hit / beat 等字面硬译。
降级处理:本就简单句无需降级这句结构简单,主干一立就基本到位,无多余分句需降级。仅需把 学者和普通人 处理成并列名词 scholars and ordinary people 作 hearts 的 of 定语。
7. 即使在今天,他们的许多诗歌仍广为儿童及成人阅读背诵。
参考译法:Even today, many of their poems are still widely read and recited by both children and adults.
主干:诗歌被阅读背诵转被动(主语策略:转被动)中文 他们的许多诗歌仍广为儿童及成人阅读背诵 的逻辑是"诗歌被人们读背"——动作承受者是诗歌,施动者是儿童成人。英文把承受者 many of their poems 提作主语、用被动 are still widely read and recited,由 by children and adults 引出施动者,最贴合"广为…阅读"的语义。
语法点:- 时态本句偏离全篇过去时基调:即使在今天…仍… 讲的是延续到现在的现状,用一般现在时被动 are still read and recited——这是全篇唯一该用现在时的句子,务必和前面过去时区分开。 - 语态用被动 be read and recited,主语 many of their poems 是被读背的对象;read 过去分词仍写 read(形不变),recited 规则变化。 - 主谓一致与单复数主语 many of their poems 是复数,系动词用 are;children 是 child 的不规则复数,adults 加 s。 - 用词广为 用副词 widely 修饰被动;阅读背诵 read and recited 两个动作并列共用一个 be。
降级处理:即使在今天降为让步状语即使在今天 降级成让步状语 Even today 置于句首,呼应"过去那么久了,到现在仍…"的让步意味。儿童及成人 作 by 后并列宾语 by children and adults。主干是被动句"诗歌被读背"。
词汇与译名提示
唐朝唐朝 用约定俗成的英文译名 the Tang Dynasty,首字母大写、Dynasty 单数加定冠词 the;全篇只要再提这个朝代,一律用 the Tang Dynasty 或代词 it,不要一会儿 Tang 一会儿 Tang Dynasty 乱换。
句1与句2之间:用承接显出发展脉络句1说唐朝是最灿烂时期,句2说经过近三百年发展成为强国,二者是"总评→具体表现"的递进。句2句首已有 After nearly three centuries of development 作背景承接,自然衔接,无需再加关联词;只要保证 the Tang Dynasty 与 Tang China 指代清楚同一对象即可。
句5与句6之间:用代词they/their承接避免重复人名句5首次出现全名 Li Bai and Du Fu,句6 他们的诗歌 不要重复人名,用 their poems 承接;句7 他们的许多诗歌 同理用 their poems,全篇人名只出一次,其后一律 they/their,读起来更连贯不啰嗦。
句6与句7之间:用Even today转出今昔对照句6讲当年诗歌"打动了"人心(过去),句7 即使在今天 讲到现在仍被读背,二者形成今昔对照。句7句首 Even today 既是让步状语又起转折承接作用,把读者从"当年"自然带到"如今",时态也随之从过去切到现在,对照鲜明。